This is the first version of the script. It was an example of the first idea we had. The script didn't seem believable at all and the language was too novel like. We decided to think of a new storyline. We still wanted to follow our themes and decided to write a new script.
The following is the later version of the script. The story line changed as did the names of our characters. We wanted to simplify the language and story line. The amount of dialogue was decreased in the second script as we wanted to focus on creating awkwardness and tension between the couple.
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