Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Preliminary Task 2: Concept by Brooke van de Water

 Atychiphobia
 (fear of failure)

Target Audience: Teenagers


Conventions:


Character: Main character will be a nervous girl, constantly displaying a miserable attitude, dancer/or singer, dressed in dark clothing - but not black navy? self doubt and conflict within her to know if she is good enough or not


Villain that lurks in the shadows, face will never be seen completely covered with a hoodie or not seen until the end of the film. Represents the typical villain that lurks in the darkness and works from behind the scenes


Close up shots: Can create anxiety and confrontation. Show detail. Example: Sweat on the girls face, body movement


Eerie and suspenseful atmosphere brought by both non diegetic and diegetic sound. Diegetic sound will be most important because it will let the audience hear what the actors hear - examples: heavy breathing of villain behind the scenes and dancer, music that goes with dance - Non-diegetic sound - crash - at the end of sequence before title flashes across the screen to show that something significant to the film has begun


Mirror - Girl stares into the mirror and it reflects how she feels inside, who she really is


Non diegetic music - drums and guitars with long pauses that create suspense


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Plot Synopsis


The opening will begin with a sequence of different scenes that will later be important in the film - The sanctuary (stage and audience)  backstage, bathroom, pathway - high angles, low angles, panning
Main Character - Sasha 1 - walking toward the sanctuary where her sanctuary will be - long shot, no camera movement
She’ll be on the phone, close up when she says “But what if I fail?”
Cuts to black screen where the title will be presented
When the title fades, we cut to a mid shot of Sasha 1 behind a curtain
Close ups on certain features of her - sweaty hands, face again
  • Voice heard in background “Sasha Peters? Sasha?”
Camera tracks her feet as she walks on stage
Camera Pans from in front of stage watching as she walks to the centre
Spotlights are placed directly on her and the judges are submersed in darkness
Camera shows Sasha 1’s point of view as she stands on stage looking out to the empty stadium - heavy breathing heard (diegetic)
P.O.V of Sasha 2 backstage as S1 introduces herself
camera pans around curtain and we see S2 backstage
Low angle shot of S1 dancing - Lights and music cuts off and everything goes black
Lights in bathroom flicker on/off - effects edited over the top
Shot 1 - Side on
Shot 2 - Over the shoulder into the mirror as she looks up and sees her own face then fades to black
Bathroom scene mirror girl with jumper looks up and sees herself
cuts off --- credits


CHARACTERS AND NAMES


Ballerina: Sasha 1 on stage (S1) (Zoe Harris? Lizzy?)
Costume:
  • Ballerina dress (light)
  • Tutu
  • Point shoes
  • Hair in bun


Relationships with other characters:
S2:  S1 is the “light” version of Sasha Pieterse. S1 is ignoring S2 and effectively pushing her to back, shoving her out of the spotlight, out of her mind, and into the dark- literally.


Purpose: Sasha 1 is the good dancer and the girl who is “stealing the show”. She is in the spotlight and she has been selected to audition for a top dance academy, yet nervous about her performance not being good enough. She is doubting herself and her abilities as we see in the film as she turns out to be her own worst enemy.


Girl in hoodie: Sasha 2 (S2) (same girl)
  • Hoodie
  • Dark clothes


Relationships with characters:
S1: S2 is crouching behind the curtain, trying to sabotage S1’s performance. S2 represents her self doubt and her own fears and failures and therefore is escence criticizing herself and fighting a battle in her mind.


Purpose: S2 is the “dark” version of Sasha. She represents her doubts and her fears. S2 is the insecure side of Sasha and is actually the side of her we see come out during the phone call when she asks “but what if i fail?”


Judges:
  • 3 of them
  • Clipboard
  • Formal attire


Relationship with Sasha:
They are assessing and judging Sasha's performance to see whether or not she is good enough for the dance school. They are now another element of criticism in Sasha’s world, making her feel closed in and nervous about being in the spotlight.


Purpose: They are assessing and judging Sasha's performance to see whether or not she is good enough for the dance school.


COSTUMES AND PROPS LIST


Sasha 1: Ballet skirt and tutu to represent her “fitting the role” and “playing the part” of the ballerina. It represents the pristine nature and character of Sasha 1 and by having her be a ballerina, who have every single strand of hair and move perfect and nothing is out of place, it shows us how she puts forward a mask of being perfect and having it all together: whereas actually, revealed at the end, we see that this is not the case.

By the end, Sasha 1 and 2 form into 1 Sasha, and as explained above, we see that this whole time she was the one sabotaging herself. Sasha’s hair is let loose and becomes ruffled and crazy, representing her mind- chaotic and a mess, and her make up is smudged from tears to show her distress and brokenness.

Monday, 2 May 2016

Foundation Portfolio Storyboard 1 by Brooke van de Water





Foundation Portfolio Shooting Schedule 1 by Alexis Phillips-Ogle

Shooting Schedule
Date: TBC


Done
Date/
Time
Scene/
Shots
Shot description/
summary
Location
Special Req and Equip.

4:20 - 5:00

Set up - 2 cameras at the top with the car
Lights down the driveway at the shed



5:00 - 5:10

Go over script and schedule



5:10 - 5:35
1 - 3
Front on shot of Olivia and Adonis in car while arguing
Side shot of Adonis
Front on close up on Olivia
Inside car at the top of driveway


5:35 - 5:45
4, 5
Wide shot from behind the car - Olivia runs around the car and toward the right side of the camera
Adonis steps out
Side profile of Adonis calling out to Olivia
Top of driveway outside car


5:45 - 6:00
6, 7
Camera tracks Olivia running down the driveway
Still as she looks between the two possible paths
P.O.V shot and side shot
Down driveway
Steadicam shoulder thingy

5:55 - 6:10
Break, Relocation of equipment



6:10 - 6:20
8, 9
Tracking shot of Olivia climbing over the fence and running to the shed
Side shot of Olivia climbing over the fence from East (Shed to the left)
Front of shed


6:20 - 6:25
13
Pan of bush opposite shed also broken down car
Behind Shed


6:25 - 6:45
10, 14
On tripod, longshot of Olivia trying to get into the shed
Long shot pan of Olivia running away
Behind Shed


6:45 - 6:55
11, 12
Side shot of Olivia at the shed door
High angle shot of Olivia at the door
Behind shed


6:50 - 7:00
Move Camera 1 to new location on the hill
Hill


6:55 - 7:00
15
Close up on the mirror of the abandoned car, Adonis reflection angry face
Behind shed


7:00 - 7:30
16,  
18 - 21
Long shot of Olivia running through gate and up hill toward forest
Close up on Olivia’s feet as she runs
Close up on Adonis feet as he walks
Hill


7:30 - 7:35
17
Close up of Olivia, heavy breathing noises
Hill


7:35 - 7:55
Break / Snacks / Relocation - Lights & Cam


7:55 - 8:10
22, 23
Long shot of Olivia running through the forest, panning
Midshot of Olivia slowing down in the forest, taking breaths before walking
Hill/Field/Forest


8:10 - 8:20
24, 25
P.O.V of Adonis looking through the forest
Close up on his feet walking through the forest
Forest


8:20 - 8:25
26
Side mid close up of Olivia against the tree
Forest


8:25 - 8:30
27/ 28
P.O.V camera rushing toward the back of Olivia behind the tree
Front close up of her lips and his hand around her neck
Forest


8:30 - 9:00
Pack down



Foundation Portfolio version 1 by Brooke van de Water

Concept:


Plot Synopsis:
Olivia and Azrael are arguing in the car about their relationship issues and how Azrael is treating Olivia. Azrael starts to raise his voice, and Olivia gets frightened- retaliating by yelling and leaving the car in a hurry. She runs down the driveway, looking for a place to hide as Azrael threatened that “it is not over.” Olivia becomes more and more hurried in trying to escape, that when the symbolic “twig snap” is heard, she becomes more and more afraid for her life. Olivia then runs up into the forest, into the darkness, and Azrael finds her and attacks her.


Characters and Names:


Boyfriend: Azrael
Meaning: Angel of Death
Costume: black and red- represent danger, death, war

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Girlfriend: Olivia
Meaning: Peace (olive)
(nickname “Liv” means “life”)
Costume: pale pink and white attire- represent purity, vulnerability
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The contrast in the costumes of “life and death” have a large symbolic influence on this film as it clearly shows the difference between Olivia and Azrael and the way in  which Azrael thinks himself to be more dominant and superior over olivia. The theme Alexis and I chose was “relationships” and the connotations of those such as male dominance and female submission, and created a film that represents this in a dramatic and near deadly way.


Shot Sequence:


Opening shot: argument in car about relationship
Running down driveway (looks both ways at end)
Looking around shed for way in
Looks at mirror
Title
Twig snap
Moves to run
Shadow stays on the wall
He comes onto the screen
She runs into forest
Feet cutting
She hides
Breathing close up
Twig snap
Rushed shot of him attacking her from behind
Grabs her neck

Shot cuts